Confederate States of Australia — A Flawless Argument
The long shadows cast by the falling sun frightened Pietra and she squeezed her brother’s hand tightly.
“Ow. Not so hard.”
“Sorry.”
“Did Mum and Dad tell you anything about the meeting?”
“They never do. You know that,” she said indignantly.
“Sorry. I thought you might’ve heard something.”
“well I didn’t.”
Yakov thought of his father and the look on his face as Yakov had pulled up. Something big was definitely happening.
A large group of adults were milling around the front of the old church so he ducked around the side and clambered up the rickety fire escape, half dragging his sister the whole way. They sat in a window sill and watched silently as the adults scattered themselves around the pews.
“Order! Order, please!” bellowed a large man standing at the altar. “The sooner we get this started, the sooner we can all leave.” The crowd hushed. “Right then. Ahh…umm…”
“Get on with it!” said a voice Yakov immediately recognised, to his embarrassment, as his father’s.
“See, here’s the thing. We’ve got nothing left.”
“What are you talking about?” His father again.
“Everything we thought we had. We don’t. The cans of food, the stockpile of combustables. We only have the emergency rations now. It was an administrative error.”
The hall exploded. Anger boiled and epithets were thrown. The front rows began to angrily march on the sweaty man.
“People! People, please. We can fix this.” The crowd continued to converge. He fumbled for anything the thought would stop them from killing him. “The Rite!”
The crowd paused mid step and the fat man fell on the opening like lion on an antelope.
“We can use The Rite to find new food sources. Ones far beyond the reach of the other Suburbs.”
“The Rite is nothing more than basic orienteering. In areas we know are safe. You want to put our kids at risk? By sending them into the badlands?” asked Hans.
“Don’t you see? It’s perfect. There’s got to be plenty out there. Just waiting for someone — us — to come claim it.”
A woman on the other side of the church piped up: “You want to risk our children on your theory?”
“Not the younger ones, but certainly those closer to 18 should be considered.”
After that flawless argument the fat man felt he was winning over the crowd. They’d stopped moving towards him now. That, plus the possibility they were considering his proposal made him very happy. He began mopping his brow, then stoped when he saw Hans barrel towards him. Apparently making up his mind far quicker than the othes.
“You want to change our one remaining sacred act? The one thing that keeps us bound to the old days? This is not your decision to make.”
Yakov stood up and cupped his hands to his mouth. The final rays of light framed him in the leadlighting. “He’s right, Pop. The decisions not any of yours to make. It’s mine. I’m going to do this.”
Lightning crackled ominously outside.




July 13th, 2008 at 1:38 pm
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