Comments on: Confederate States of Australia — Annotations http://www.innocentbystander.org/blog/2008/09/04/confederate-states-of-australia-annotations/ Being the intermittent ramblings of a would be writer living in Melbourne, Australia. Wed, 09 Dec 2009 07:39:11 -0800 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Mike http://www.innocentbystander.org/blog/2008/09/04/confederate-states-of-australia-annotations/comment-page-1/#comment-9526 Mike Thu, 04 Sep 2008 12:00:22 +0000 http://www.innocentbystander.org/blog/?p=316#comment-9526 I've plenty of comments I'm sure I could write here, but I will bore neither myself or you reciting them; I'll put just a few here; I'm sure you like them. One comment I wanted to make (after inserting a few semi-colons) is that I actually think we needed to flesh out the story a bit more before we started, although I think what we had was certainly enough. Another is that I think we tried to stuff the plot of a novel into that of a short story. And finally, since we've had very few comments from others, I'm glad you enjoyed reading my parts (even if you didn't always agree with the direction); I did enjoy yours (and had to finish off with another semi-colon). I’ve plenty of comments I’m sure I could write here, but I will bore neither myself or you reciting them; I’ll put just a few here; I’m sure you like them.

One comment I wanted to make (after inserting a few semi-colons) is that I actually think we needed to flesh out the story a bit more before we started, although I think what we had was certainly enough.

Another is that I think we tried to stuff the plot of a novel into that of a short story.

And finally, since we’ve had very few comments from others, I’m glad you enjoyed reading my parts (even if you didn’t always agree with the direction); I did enjoy yours (and had to finish off with another semi-colon).

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